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Zuko glared. "How dare you? We all know that is a lie!" he gasped, taking a step back. Mai smirked. "Hm, really? Everyone would believe that the Fire Lord has slept around. Your father had multiple concubines, so why shouldn't you use me as that way?" she asked, her face emotionless but he could hear the smirk in her voice. Zuko shook his head. "Mai, we were never like that! It couldn't be mine!" he said, angry that she would lie about such a thing. Mai shrugged. "You know that and I know that but the people won't. There is no one to stop this. I will you give you one day, Fire lord, then everyone will know." she said, triumphant in her voice. Katara pushed the door open. "I know."

Mai turned around, looking at her. "You are but a water peasant. Why would anyone believe you." she glared. Katara scoffed. "I am a master water bender and the fire lords adviser. They would believe me before they believe a slutty fire nation noble women." she said, walking in. Zuko looked at Katara shocked. "You say that it is Zuko, but in truth I bet you don't even know who the father is, do you Mai? You just want to be royalty since things are not working out you want. We can have you imprisoned for saying such a thing. Life in prison. I will give you a choice. You either leave the palace and say nothing of the terrible rumor or be imprisoned. Under Zuko's rule, of course." she said, her voice all business. Zuko tried to hold back a smile at his water bender. 'Yes, his..' he thought to himself. Mia stood there shocked before turning to leave. "Watch your back, water bender." she said as she left and was shown out of the palace by the guards.

Katara sighed and shook her head. "I am sorry for disturbing your talk, Fire Lord, but it seemed you were in need of help." she said coolly. She figured what had happened only minutes before with them was something that was a mistake, not matter how much she didn't want it to be. Zuko flinched at the way she talked. "Katara-" he said but she cut him off. "You were disoriented and didn't know what to tell me. It is fine." she said, walking out and shutting the door behind her. She just had to get to her room before the tears burst free. Her room seemed so far away but finally she made it, bursting in and shutting the door behind her before falling onto the bed in tears.

Katara knew that they would never be. He was the Fire Lord and she just his adviser. She had caused problems because of liking him and felt like he only desired a women. He just should of taken Mai back, she shouldn't cause problems. Katara sighed. Maybe he should fine a man adviser. She knew she was well pass marrying age in her tribe. She should just go back and marry a man that was 'suitable' for her. She didn't want to but it might be for the best. Her and Zuko were just.... just to complicated. They shouldn't of even played that love game as they did.

Zuko watched her go. Mai had messed this up. He had messed this up. He felt like banging his head against a wall. Multiple times. He sighed and paced the room, trying to figure out how to fix this, again.He hated how Katara had acted. Like there was nothing between them, like nothing ever was. He sighed, cursing the bad timing and how he acted to hell and back. He would be upset to if she had walked out on him for another when they were like that. Hell, he'd probably of beat the man down, but he had run to Mai as a child a mother almost. He felt pathetic. He wasn't sure what to tell her. She knew he loved her. He hoped she still knew that it was true. He wasn't saying it just to bed her, though he would really like to, it was more than that. Zuko sighed. He'd have to talk to her, in the morning though. It was too late tonight and he thought she might want to be alone for a while. Tomorrow, it would all be set right and she'd be his. Finally.

The next morning, Zuko had woken later than usual because he was up thinking of Katara most of the night and couldn't sleep. He got dressed quickly and went to go find her. He hoped by the end of day, they would be okay and together. He smiled at the thought as he went to Katara's room. He knocked softly. When no one answered, he peeked inside. The bed was already made and no Katara. He figured she would already be up, so went to the dinning hall. When she wasn't there he walked around, thinking where in the palace the water bender could be. When he couldn't find her, he sighed. He figured she went out for the day. He could live a day without his adviser. She deserved it. He went off to the council room and started his duty's for the day.

Zuko groaned as he finally left the council room. It was past dinner and he had missed seeing Katara. It was getting late but he wanted, no, he needed to see her. He had to make everything right and make her his. He had to. He went to her room and knocked. Again, she was no where to be seen. He finally asked a guard, which gave him a strange look. "What is it?" Zuko asked, confused. The man bowed. "I am sorry sir, but she had to us that you knew and not to mention it. Lady Katara left this morning for the south pole, telling you of her resignation as your adviser. She found a more suitable one she said." he said, reciting what she had told him. Zuko looked at him, heartbroken and shocked. "She left....?" he asked again. The guard nodded. "Yes, to marry the man her father betrothed for her."
wee finally got this out! :D See, see!!! It's longer :D hehe not by much but still! ^^ Hope you all like it, was in major writers block to what to put to this. Oh the drama! Lmao <3 I SWEAR that there will be smuttyness in the next one!!!! I love all of ya! <3
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xxxzutaraxxx Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Student Writer
GODDAMNIT HAKODA YOU FUCKING DICKSUCKING ASSRAPING CUNT!!!!!! YOU MESSED WITH THE BALANCE OF ZUTARA AND NOW YOU SHALL PAY THE ULTIMATE PRICE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Student Writer
:lmao: that's just how he rolls
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xTaangforevahx Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
CURSE YOU MAI AND CURSE THE PERSON WHO INVENTED CLIFF-HANGS!!!!:shakefist: x 1000
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010  Student Writer
hahaha I'm sorry xD Evil mai haha
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xTaangforevahx Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
*grabs chainsaw*:chainsaw: ATTACK!!!!:evillaugh:
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010  Student Writer
haha why do i always get the crazy fan-girls lmao xD Just kidding XD It gets better, keep reading! :D
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xTaangforevahx Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010  Student Digital Artist
It's okay, I know I'm crazy... You got a problem with that?:threaten:

*Mental Note: Gotta lay of the cactus juice!:saddrunk:*
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010  Student Writer
XD Yes i do, what are you gonna do about it?! Lmao, its all good, love the craziness
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xTaangforevahx Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010  Student Digital Artist
You wanna know what I'm gonna do about it?:plotting: TOPH! KATARA!

-what happens next can only be viewed by 20 and older!-:evillaugh:
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010  Student Writer
YUCKKKKKKKKK *throws up*
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SecretWarrior Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
omg omg omg omg .. @*&%$&*%#*&%@(*&^$)(*!&%#^

no worries.. everything's cool, they'll get back together and everything's finee..

oh well - atleast mais gone.. damn i hate her!!
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010  Student Writer
hahaha she is evil! XD
haha keep telling your self that :evillaugh:
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Katie-the-Great07 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
what did mai do to her :O_o:?
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Student Writer
What exactly do you mean? ^^
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Katie-the-Great07 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
at the end she "ran away to marry her betrothed"
Mai kidnapped her, didnt she?
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Student Writer
haha actually, no xD
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Katie-the-Great07 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
lol yea i figured. cant wait for chap 5 :D is he gonna follow her? :giggle: I make too many assumptions
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Student Writer
haha You'll just have to wait and see my love XD
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Katie-the-Great07 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
lol i guess i have no choice :XD:
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zutararules777 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
:tears: she left....dumb zuko, but i cant hate u and ur sexyness lol too bad katara left but then again so did mai :D
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Student Writer
haha well thank you! I'm glad you think I'm sexy lmao! At least crazy women is gone haha
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zutararules777 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
haha lol i met zuko but eh u could be too lol who knows :dance: and sometimes crazy women r funny lol
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cupcakelove29 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
zuko reslly got himself in a spot this time. how will he ever get out of this without uncles wisdom ;)
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Student Writer
haha he might not ;) I love his uncle tis epic! XD
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cupcakelove29 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
really not reslly -_-
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kazenary Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Student Photographer
AHHHHHHHHHHH it's so gooooooooood Q_Q
Yes, A LIE!! MUHAHAHA. Disappear Mai! XDD

Omg this was such a epic chapter.. why did she leave wuääh q_Q *cry~
So much drama..yeah, I really like this one. It's so good.. Q_Q!! GOOOOOD.
No.. not good.. it was AWESOME Q_Q!
I hope Zuko will follow her. HE HAVE TO Q_Q

(one time you've wrote "Mia" instead of Mai xDD)
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Student Writer
I'm so very glad!!! :D I'm glad that it was awesome xD And I'm sorry!!!! I was writing this at 4 in the morning and I was sooooo tired XD
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kazenary Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010  Student Photographer
omg 4 o'clock.. holy shit XDDD
nope, one mistake is not bad ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter Q_Q !
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010  Student Writer
Nope, better than i was doing before xD hehe I'll get it up ASAP
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4eversimpleplan Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
mooore smuttyness!! i want smuttyness XD
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Student Writer
haha It will get there I promise!!! :D xDD And it will probably have a whole LONG chap of its own for it and many more xDD
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4eversimpleplan Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
:D :meow: me like smuttyness !!!! :heart:
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010  Student Writer
hahaha who doesn't? It is epic XDD
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4eversimpleplan Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010
very EPIC XD!!!!!!!!
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010  Student Writer
Thanks!!!! :D
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4eversimpleplan Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010
You're welcome!!!!!
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010  Student Writer
:D :tighthug:
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KagomeAdrianna Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
I love it! Hate the cliffhangers!
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Student Writer
I know, everyone does XD But it makes you wanna read the next part xD
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KagomeAdrianna Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
So true that's what I do when I write my sess/kag story.
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010  Student Writer
haha I'll have to check those out XD
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KagomeAdrianna Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010
Please do!
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RayneWolfspeaker Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
damn the cliff hanger!!!
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Student Writer
hehe I know, it is evil!!!
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RayneWolfspeaker Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you evil, evil person!
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Student Writer
haha yes but a evil person you luff!!!!! :D
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RayneWolfspeaker Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
actually, now that I think about it, you aren't EVIL.
but I know what you are
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010  Student Writer
oh and what am I? XD
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RayneWolfspeaker Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WICKED!
lol walked right into that one
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phsycopathicpenguin Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010  Student Writer
haha knew it xDD You might be Wicked But I iz Elphaba hahaha xDD
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